What World is This
What world is this
That leaves you feeling alone in a crowded room
What world is this
That renders everyone you speak to, touch, blind to your love
What world is this?
I’ll tell you what world
A world where you feel empty inside
Because of all you give, it seems nothing matters
To anyone
Just running on used up hope and unheard wishes
A world where there are sugar coated walls
That every now and then make you happy
But when it rains you see the real world again
Who’s walls confine you, and keep you from reaching the greener side
A world where everything, everyone, you know and love can be lost
In an instant, with no warning
Then with nothing else to lose, you tear down those walls
Only to see that they were holding back the ocean which then floods over you
A world where you are just drifting
Waiting
For the end to come and pull you down below
And when it does, you think to yourself
What world is this?
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Just me venting my feelings. I know I'm not that great at writing poems. Usually they're just thoughts all jumbled together, but this time I tried to give it some form that looked halfway decent. Comments appreciated.
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no more. no more sorrow. no. not until tomorrow.
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I am honered to have this as a
Great work, ryan.
I actually never read poetry..till now.
Hannah
Halfway decent indeed. Since you mention you don't usually write poetry and whatnot I will spare you the technical critiques. It is a worn-out subject though...
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